Hazy Days and Cloudy Nights 01.013: How It All Got Started: Leave It ‘Till The End Of The Party

Previously: Crystal DuBois, after catching Preston VanHart cheating on her, caught Eric Finn trying to rape Lina Porter. Crystal kicked the shit out of Eric. Meanwhile, Alex Kent fears he’s made a mistake with Heather Leighton…

"Leave It 'Till The End Of The Party"

Eventually, it was just Crystal and Preston in the house. They stood inside the front door. Preston looked anywhere but at her and chewed on the skin of his thumb.

"See ya," Crystal said.

"Uh... yeah."

"Do me a favor and stick my stuff in a bag or something." She opened the door and stepped through. "I'll get someone to come by and pick it up."

Preston nodded. He still didn't look at her.

"Way to fuck it all up forever, Preston," Crystal said.

He finally did look at her. She could see he was still a little buzzed. His attempt at a smile was quick and weak and didn't survive when he took his thumb out of his mouth. "Yeah. You... think forever?"

Crystal closed the screen door so black mesh and wrought iron was between them. Her chest constricted; she forced a few quick breaths in and out to control threatening tears. "You know me. I can forgive a lot."

He brightened a little.

"But you went and fucked Tall Skinny motherfucking Gail."

Preston's face fell. Crystal pressed on.

"It's like you deliberately took a shit on my fucking heart, Preston." She shook her head. It was time to bail if she was going to keep it together.

"On my fucking heart, Preston."

"Crys..."

"Later."

She turned her back on him and walked as fast as she could without breaking into a run. She got to her old Nova, got behind the wheel, jammed the key into the ignition and gave it a vicious twist.

The engine came to life, and with it, the cassette in the tape deck. John and Exene sang about painting the town blue. Crystal blinked and drove through tears that turned the streetlights into smeary stars.


Heather pulled in front of Alex’s house, put the car in park and engaged the brake. Her smile was vulnerable, hopeful and guarded. “Here we are.”

“Yep.” Alex smiled back. “I’m sorry about this.”

Her laugh was short and a little frantic. “What about? It’s no big deal.”

They looked at each other. Her smile started to stiffen from the eyes down. Alex leaned forward, gave her a chaste kiss on the lips, and opened the car door. “See you soon..?”

“Not if I see you first,” Heather said.

He laughed politely. “Good night.”

“Good night.”

He stepped out of the car, closed the door, and stood at the end of his driveway until her car was out of sight. It was the right thing to do; he guessed that she would be checking her rear view mirror as she left. He didn’t want to be a dick.

Too late for that. He was a dick. Sleeping with someone he didn’t really love; that was new ground. He felt like shit.

He let himself into the dark house, felt his way to his bedroom, closed the door and turned on the light. It was only 12:30… it was early! Should he risk calling Angel? Would she answer fast enough to avoid waking up her folks? Was she already asleep?

Was she out, on a date with jock-prick Mike Dante?

That was an ugly thought.

Would he be able to call her, talk to her at all, on the phone in the kitchen without waking up his parents? His dad would be pissed…

He stood in his bedroom and weighed it out.

“Fuck this.” He slapped the wall switch down, clicking off his bedroom overhead light, and crept into the kitchen. The way he figured it… and this was twisted, but right… he owed it to Heather to call Angel.

He dialed Angel’s number by memory and touch. The phone rang once, almost twice, and there she was.

“Hello..?”

“Hey!” Alex kept his voice down. “Did I wake you up?”

“Hey..!” She was likewise half-whispering. “No… but you might have woken up my dad…!”

“Sorry… I… we haven’t talked for a few days. I couldn’t sleep; thought I’d catch up with you.”

Alex was mortified to discover that he was nervous. This was Angel, for Christ’s sake.

Exactly.

“Well…” Her tone told him she thought he could have waited until tomorrow to catch up, but here they were. “I guess I’m all right.”

“You guess? That’s not the same as all right.”

“Guess not.”

Alex couldn’t decide if he felt bad for his friend or excited that her less-than-optimal mood might be because of Mike Dante being an asshole. “So? Tell me.”

She sighed into the phone. “Ugh. It’s nothing.”

That was new. There was no “it’s nothing” between them. They didn’t work that way. “C’mon, Angel. It’s me.”

“Yeah.” She sounded dubious.

“So?”

He was ready to hear about a bad date. He was ready to be pissed off if Dante had been mean to her, or worse, tried to do something she didn’t want.

“Are you…” She sighed heavily. “Do you like me, Alex?”

Whoa. He wasn’t ready for that.


Car did not have an easy time getting Lina out of the car and into the house. She wasn’t a big girl, but she was dead weight, and he was acutely conscious of not wanting to accidentally hurt her.

First, he got her arm across his shoulders and held her tight around her waist. Hopefully, she would stumble along with him.

She didn’t. Her feet dragged along the driveway.

He’d never tried carrying anyone before, but there didn’t seem to be any other right way to do this. Car crouched down, hooked his left arm under Lina’s knees, and straightened up. He wasn’t especially weak or especially strong, so it took some effort to straighten his legs, keep her steady, and not fall backwards. He grunted and hoped none of his neighbors were watching.

“Okay. Here we go.”

Car lurched up the slope of his front walk and got to the front door, which was when he realized his keys were in his front pocket. He needed a free hand. He had to put Lina down.

Bracing Lina between himself and the door frame, Car fished out his keys and got the door open. He got Lina through the door as carefully as possible and closed and locked the door.

He picked up Lina again. Her breath tickled his neck and she mumbled something unintelligible.

“Almost there, Lina…”

He carried her back to his bedroom and lay her on the bed without bothering to pull down the spread. Instead, he folded it over her as and figured it would be enough of a blanket.

Lina mumbled something else and even moved a little, settling into the bed. Carson felt something loosen in his chest and he let out a long, shuddering breath.

“Oh, god, Lina,” he whispered. “No more nights like tonight. Jesus.”

She slept.

Car padded into the kitchen and got himself a drink of water. He noticed the answering machine’s little red LED blinking. Car feared it was Lina’s parents, but he wasn’t about to call them until Lina was awake and coherent. There’d be hell to pay, but the price wouldn’t be that much higher tomorrow morning. Lina needed to rest.

Hell, he needed to rest. Now that Lina was truly safe, the adrenaline he hadn’t known was sustaining him melted out of him in a flood. He stumbled back to the bedroom, lay down beside his friend, and closed his eyes.

“Lina…” Another wave of relief hit him. He blinked tears. “Okay. Okay.” She was safe. Crystal DuBois beat the shit out of Eric Finn — he’d be feeling that tomorrow, the fucker. And Lina was safe, here, with him.

He rolled onto his side and pulled her close against him. “You’re safe.”

Car’s sleep was thick with anxiety and cloudy threats. When the phone rang, it yanked him awake with a start.

The clock said four eighteen. For the rest of his life, more often than not, he would inexplicably manage to look at a clock at least once a week at exactly four eighteen.

Sleep fuzzed and blunted his reluctance to face Lina’s parents. He picked up the phone.

“Hello..?”

“Carson…. Carson, thank god. Thank god.”

It wasn’t Grant or Amanda Porter.

“Uncle Mick..?”

“Carson… Carson, buddy, I need you to wake up, okay? I need to tell you something, kiddo. Okay? Are you… are you ready?”

…to be continued!

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Hazy Days and Cloudy Nights 01.012: How It All Got Started: The Party, Part Three

Previously: At Preston VanHart’s party, Lina Porter faces her older boyfriend in order to break up with him… and finds herself in a distressing situation. Crystal Dubois discovers Preston in the bathroom, not alone. When she retreats in anger to a back bedroom of the house, Crystal discovers it’s already occupied. Meanwhile, Alex Kent and Heather Leighton consummate their new relationship, but the end result catches Alex by surprise…

“The Party, Part Three”

Lena was mostly passed out. Her legs hung over the edge of the bed. Her head lolled. Her lids were not quite closed over eyes that rolled in their sockets.

Eric stood over her and smiled. The pill had done its work, no problem. He knew she was a lightweight. Now it was time to close the deal.

He pulled her legs apart and pushed up her skirt, exposing white panties. His breath quickened and he started to sweat. There was so much going on that was so fucking perfect about this. Virgin. Under age. Totally helpless. This was one hell of an experience, all right. Fuck yeah.

He undid his belt and let his loose chinos drop to his ankles. His cock was painfully hard against his boxer shorts.

Too fucking perfect.

Eric reached between Lina’s legs and got his hand on the waistband of her panties. She didn’t even moan.

Four things happened next; none of them expected; none of them good.

The bedroom door opened.

Eric heard Crystal DuBois screech, “What the fuck?”

Eric started to turn around, but he had to shuffle since his pants were down around his ankles.

Crystal’s Doc Martens combat boot slammed fast and hard into Eric’s unprotected testicles.


Later, Crystal would remember opening the door. She would remember nailing mother-fucking Eric Finn dead center. And she would remember Preston grabbing her shoulders and pulling her back.

She had no memory of Eric Finn doubling over and tripping on his pants, or his hitting the floor at her feet, but he must have, because Preston later told her she’d been kicking the bastard in the head and ribs repeatedly before he yanked her away.

She was pissed at Preston; he and Eric Finn were All Men, just then. She twisted and hollered, but her blind rage subsided as quickly as she broke free. Hot fury gave way to iron determination.

No more girls were getting hurt tonight. Not like this.

Crystal turned and put herself between Preston and the bed. She noticed Eric Finn scrambling across the room and pulling up his pants, but her instincts held her at her post. Everything was protect the girl. Her mother had done it for her often enough, and damn if Crystal hadn’t done it for her mother the one, last time it really mattered. Now, it was time to protect this one. Protect the girl.

Preston looked confused and scared. Of the situation, or of her? Better be both, if he was smart. She looked over his shoulder toward the door. Fucker Eric Finn slipped past Brad Kruger, who had appeared in the doorway with Crystal’s hat askew on his curly-haired head. She found Brad’s eyes.

“Do you know who Carson Meunetti is?”

“I — yeah, I think…”

“Go get him. Go! And close the fucking door!”

Brad nodded, eyes wide. He whirled and slammed the door behind him.

Crystal glanced at Preston. “No one comes in but Carson.” She didn’t wait for his response before gently closing the girl’s legs. Her name was Lina. Lina Porter. That was it. Crystal crouched down next to her head.

Lina was still unconscious, snoring slightly. Crystal turned her head to one side so the girl wouldn’t choke on her own spit.


Brad found Carson in the back yard. “Dude, you’re Carson?”

“Yeah — Brad, right..?”

“Yeah. Come right now.” He held a hand in front of Carson’s old junior high school buddy, Jim. “Just you.”

Brad turned and took long, urgent strides back toward the house. Carson followed him. Something about the guy’s tone… it triggered primate instincts of alarm. Something was way wrong.

Brad opened Preston’s mom’s bedroom door and jerked his head toward the room. Carson wordlessly slipped past him. Brad closed the door, staying in the hall. Standing guard?

Carson saw Preston, saw Crystal… and then saw Lina. He was at the door, then he was on his knees next to the bed and at her side. No time, no distance, no steps between. Crystal made room.

“What…?”

Crystal’s voice was hard. “I think she was drugged. And would have been raped.”

Car looked at Crystal. She looked back at him. Over the years to come, Crystal would do a lot of stuff Car couldn’t condone. Even so, he would never deny her some compassion and the benefit of the doubt because of how she looked at him that night, and what she had done to save his best friend. He nodded to her, a wordless thanks.

“Was it…”

“Yep.”

Carson closed his eyes and swallowed. For a moment, he wanted to cry. That passed quickly into wanting to kill, and that was something new, something he’d never really felt before and never really understood, never really thought of as more than a movie cliché, but there it was: Carson wanted to see Eric Finn dead, and he wanted to do it, wanted to take Eric Finn’s breath, stop his heart, and do it with his bare hands.

It was too intense to last. All that mattered was that Lina was, if not okay, at least spared from what could have been.

He sighed heavily.

“I gotta get her out of here.”

Crystal nodded sharply and stood up. “Party’s over,” she said to Preston. “Get everybody out.”

Carson heard the door open and close. He kept his eyes on Lina.

“My parents are out of town,” he said. “I’ll take her back to my place. Make sure she’s… make sure she sleeps it off.”

Crystal didn’t answer right away. She saw the expression of love and worry and good solid caring on Carson’s face and bit her lip. They weren’t all Eric Finn. They weren’t all her god damn dad. They weren’t even all Preston.

“She’ll be all right,” she said.


Heather, soundly sleeping, breathed softly next to Alex. She lay on her side, facing him. The back of her hand just barely touched his forearm and moved slightly now and then as, he assumed, she dreamed.

Alex lay on his back and stared into the darkness. Sleep wasn’t happening; not for him.

He sighed. He was with the wrong girl.

Heather was the wrong girl.

Damn it.

He’d mistaken their unusual, emotionally intimate first meeting for something different, something… true. Man, he’d wanted it to be that. He really, really wanted something true. He really wanted to know what that was like; if it was even real.

He’d never experienced anything like the night at Grant’s, when he and Heather bared their souls while Grant and his girlfriend did their thing in the other room. It had seemed like something rare, remarkable.

Now, even laying in her bed after making love, Alex realized that while he and Heather had shared a lot of facts about each other, they didn’t really know each other. Not really.

It was the sex that drove that point home, for him, at least. Alex had only ever been with Eve, but he knew enough to understand that the first time with someone wasn’t necessarily indicative of how good it might get, with time. That was fine; Alex got that. The problem was that all the emotional intensity with Heather on Monday night was just flat out missing in action when they slept together.

Maybe that was his fault. Maybe he had expected too much; built the whole thing up to be more than it was; more than it could be, yet.

He sighed again. Heather stirred and mumbled in her sleep.

Alex hadn’t asked for the fantasy vision of Angel to pop into his head. He hadn’t known it would happen, and hadn’t expected it to push him into coming.

But it did.

Of course Alex had imagined Angel… that way… before. Even before Monday, when he’d started the first day of summer with a strong, confusing and utterly compelling urge to see her and she’d started to happen for him, it was only natural he’d envisioned her very female attributes now and then when he’d masturbated. But that had been… well, that was just convenient objectification.

The problem, or discovery, or… complication… was that when she’d popped into his head while he was having sex with Heather, it wasn’t exactly the thought of her body beneath him that did it.

It was the recognition that being on top of Angel was where he really wanted to be.

Alex grinned a little shamefully in the darkness. It was pretty crass, thinking of it that way, but the point was that he wanted to be with Angel. He had to know if their deep friendship, their multi-layered knowledge of and care for each other, would translate into something more.

He needed to know right now.

But how? Heather had driven them here. Damn.

It didn’t matter. He didn’t feel right, being here, and the urge to see Angel, to talk to her, to tell her… well, he’d figure that part out when he got there, but he needed to get there. He’d go find a phone – he remembered seeing a convenience store on the corner down the street from Heather’s place – and call a cab.

Very slowly and with great care, Alex slipped out from under the sheet and out of bed. His eyes were dark-adapted, but it was still a challenge to find all his clothing. Crawling on his hands and knees around the bed, he managed to find his shirt and socks. He buttoned his shirt and started to pull on the first sock, but he lost his balance and sat down heavily on the edge of the bed.

Heather woke up.

“Alex..?”

“It’s okay,” he whispered.

“Whuddayuhdoon..?”

Her sleep-fuzzed voice was endearing. Alex felt a pang of guilt. “I can’t sleep. It’s okay.”

She turned on the nightstand lamp and squinted at him. She held the blankets tight at her neck.

Alex was very aware that he was naked between his waist and shins. He grinned sheepishly. He spotted his underwear and scooped them up.

Heather frowned. “Where are you going..?”

“I’m sorry… I just can’t sleep.”

She shrugged. Alex saw her smile quiver slightly. “We don’t have to sleep. I don’t have to sleep. We can do whatever. Watch TV…”

Alex’s heart clenched. “I — I was just gonna head home.”

She turned her head. “Oh.” She frowned. “Um… how?”

He found his pants and pulled them up. A quick pat of the pockets assured him that his keys and wallet hadn’t fallen out.

“I… uh… I was going to call a cab,” he said. “I didn’t want to wake you. It’s really okay.” He smiled and hoped it didn’t look like mercy. “You sleep.”

Her smile came back, stronger. “It’s a crappy bed. I’ve been meaning to buy a bigger one. Now I have a reason.”

He didn’t know what to say to that, so he laughed quickly and bent to kiss her. She made that a little more of a production than he had wanted. He didn’t resist, but he was the one to break away first.

“Just hang on,” she said. “I’ll take you home.”

“I don’t –”

“Alex, please let me take you home. I’d feel stupid if you took a cab.” She looked uncertain again. “Did you have fun tonight? Did you… was it…”

“I had a great night.”

…to be continued!

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Hazy Days and Cloudy Nights Hiatus

Hey gang — just a quick note to the folks reading “Hazy Days and Cloudy Nights,” my ongoing serial fiction project.

I’m putting the future episodes on hiatus until January 4, 2010. This will give me the chance to:

  1. Finish the preparation for, and publish, “The Sovereign Era: Year One”
  2. Get two or three installments of “Hazy Days and Cloudy Nights” written ahead of time (maybe more?)

Finishing and publishing “The Sovereign Era: Year One” is the main reason. I have two creative obligations this autumn: the first was to prepare and package “Anyman: The John Smith E.P.” for sale and distribution through CD Baby.com. That’s all set — the album should be available for purchase as a CD or as MP3s pretty much everywhere at the beginning of December.

The second is “The Sovereign Era: Year One.” I have a few more edits to run through, and page layout to figure out, and then getting a proof back, etc. I’m committed to having all of that done before the end of Autumn, which gives me about a month.

So “Hazy Days and Cloudy Nights” is going to take a back seat for the moment. We’ll have to wait to see just what it was that Crystal saw when she opened that door… but who doesn’t love a good cliffhanger?

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